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6.13大作文解析及范文

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  • 2018/1/22 13:33:41
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613的大作文题目几乎是2014.8.16的原题重现,都是关于城市商业外迁,虽然这次的题目中对于外迁的原因有了界定——因为交通和住房问题所以鼓励外迁,但是依旧相对简单,考生们可从城市,企业和乡村这几个角度去思考优缺点,从而确定自己的立场。

Because of traffic and housing problems in the cities,the government encourages business move to the rural area. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
 

613的大作文题目几乎是2014.8.16的原题重现,都是关于城市商业外迁,虽然这次的题目中对于外迁的原因有了界定——因为交通和住房问题所以鼓励外迁,但是依旧相对简单,考生们可从城市,企业和乡村这几个角度去思考优缺点,从而确定自己的立场。
优点:缓解城市交通和住房问题(avoid further overcrowding);缓解城市污染;促进农村地区的发展(就业,企业对住房/设施的需求),缩小城乡差距;减少企业开支/成本;农村地区(rural areas, deprived areas)有更多的空间的土地
缺点:城市人口失业率上升/农村地区劳动力不足(surplus of workforce; higher employment rate; grater availability of skilled workers in cities);乡村地区基础设施落后(交通);不利于企业与客户或者供货商的联系(人口,资源)
Cities are the places where always attract businesses along with the explosion of serious traffic and housing issues. Hence, it is suggested that industries or companies could transfer to rural areas to reduce these problems. I am convinced that the positives far overwhelm the negatives.
On the one hand, it can be argued that there are significant drawbacks to companies and businesses moving their venues outside metropolises. First, the availability of skilled workers in deprived places is lower than that in cities, which hinders the expansion of a corporation. A further point is that rural places lack better transport and infrastructure, which is an obstacle for any companies to reach a wider range of customers and clients, to deliver commodities and to get contact with suppliers.
On the other hand, transferring industries and businesses to regional areas benefit both areas and companies. For businesses, the cost will be saved enormously owing to the lower price of setting business, running offices and labors. In terms of urban areas, further overcrowding in cities can be avoided for population would reduce with the transfer of companies. In this case, traffic congestion and shortage of housing issues can be reduced. Besides, contamination such as air pollution and noise pollution produced by industries could be diminished. Regarding regional and rural areas, the transfer will foster local economy by binding various development due to demand in diverse sectors such as housing, water and food, helping deprived people to improve living standard.
In conclusion, although shifting businesses brings about negatives to companies, from a long-term perspective, the benefits of relocating industries, such as addressing city problems, promoting balanced economy development and cutting down cost are evident.
 
 

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